Talk:Npesta/@comment-31868138-20190805224952

The history section is really unprofessionally written in some places like "where it's an extremely funny reaction, apparently"

- Obviously this is literally an opinion, it's not fact that it is funny so it has no place, also I don't know what that "apparently" is there for, just makes it sounds like sarcasm or something

"The demon list had obvious reasons for Tosh to hack, and EVERYONE believed npesta."

- That's literally just bias and your own opinion on the situation, not a fact to put in an article. Doesn't matter if you dislike ToshDeluxe.

Then took on another verification project, which was pretty easy for npesta"

- Literally unneccessary information at the end there, you could have ended it as just "Then took on another verification project."

"The level was a megacollab called Unearthed by Yakobnugget. He verified it on December 3. anyway, Deimos Deimos Deimos"

Yeah quickly go back to Deimos because that's OBVIOUSLY way more "important" and "significant" than this easier level. Let me just put the word "anyway" there only to really push that.

Yeah this is really unprofessionally written and i'll try to fix all of this in short guys, don't worry :)